i know better

i know better

and still

Regret

clenches at my heart

radiating rage

my blood festers

i clench my teeth

and bite down on all the words

that would reveal

me

weak.

Advertisements

8 thoughts on “i know better

  1. QueridaJ says:

    I’m glad, let’s hope your smile is an unbroken trend =) Take care, Que =)

  2. Pawan Hira (awakeningpsyche) says:

    and bite down on all the words
    that would reveal
    me
    weak.

    and that adds so much strength to your voice…….amazing piece…:)

  3. Eric Alagan says:

    Please don’t get me wrong when I say – this is one of your better pieces (does not mean the others are poor).

    Your choice of words enliven the passion of this verse by providing vivid imagery. You conclude with a profound thought – our words reveal us.

    An excellent piece of literary art, I think 🙂

    • QueridaJ says:

      Thank you Eric, really I take no offense to your comments, I know you help me in my understanding so much. Thank you so much for your too kind words, your comments always add to the pieces you are posting about =) Take care, Que.

  4. asoulwalker says:

    It is funny the things we find ourselves afraid of.

Thank you for your valuable comments! =)

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in:

WordPress.com Logo

You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. Log Out / Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out / Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out / Change )

Google+ photo

You are commenting using your Google+ account. Log Out / Change )

Connecting to %s