i know better
and still
Regret
clenches at my heart
radiating rage
my blood festers
i clench my teeth
and bite down on all the words
that would reveal
me
weak.
intotheindigo
My muse's quiet amusement
i know better
and still
Regret
clenches at my heart
radiating rage
my blood festers
i clench my teeth
and bite down on all the words
that would reveal
me
weak.
intotheindigo 
I’m glad, let’s hope your smile is an unbroken trend =) Take care, Que =)
and bite down on all the words
that would reveal
me
weak.
and that adds so much strength to your voice…….amazing piece…:)
Thank you Pawan =) Your “Burning Within” is really amazing on a whole new level! Take care, Que
:)…..thanks for making me smile after many days….:)…..blessings and love…
Please don’t get me wrong when I say – this is one of your better pieces (does not mean the others are poor).
Your choice of words enliven the passion of this verse by providing vivid imagery. You conclude with a profound thought – our words reveal us.
An excellent piece of literary art, I think 🙂
Thank you Eric, really I take no offense to your comments, I know you help me in my understanding so much. Thank you so much for your too kind words, your comments always add to the pieces you are posting about =) Take care, Que.
It is funny the things we find ourselves afraid of.
Yes, very true, being vulnerable can be a scary thing.