blur and part

“the people blur and part”

and i await for the words to come

a frantic search

through many no longer sticky notes

bent and creased and come apart

with scribbles, waves and loops

half brackets, slashes and arrows

and lines wobbily crossed out

all tossed aside for that one

where all that has stuck

to memory

are “the people blur and part”

a thunderous sound

the platform trembles

a whoosh of stale and mechanical air

an impatient rush, quick shuffles and speakered din

all scattered now

and stuck between the tracks


6 thoughts on “blur and part

  1. Pawan Hira (awakeningpsyche) says:

    I can truly feel this…it’s wonderful how people can connect in varied ways in this world….amazing….:)

  2. Eric Alagan says:

    clackity clack clackity clack….the rhythm of my commuting life…

  3. moses11 says:

    I really enjoy your style, it’s refreshing and has beauty I would compare to that of a colt, somewhat awkward and gangly till it hit’s its stride and becomes a symphony of grace and elegance. Keep it up 🙂

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