April 18, 2012 by QueridaJ spotted i scrap away at a tiny pale dot the eye catches it quickly in the sea of black and grey encrusted and much shrunk it’s sheen dulled it’s surface marked it nonetheless remains stubborn my little spot of faded virtue Share this:TwitterFacebookTumblrLike this:Like Loading... Related
I love how the last line changes the whole poem.
=) Yes i hoped I didn’t make it too obvious so that the last line would change the reader’s perception =) Thank you for noticing asoulwalker =) Take care, Que
I like it all, very lyrical, but especialy the last line contrasted against earlier, “in the sea of black and grey”
Thank you clarabetty =) Your attention to detail is so flattering =) Take care, Que