4 thoughts on “spotted

  1. asoulwalker says:

    I love how the last line changes the whole poem.

    • QueridaJ says:

      =) Yes i hoped I didn’t make it too obvious so that the last line would change the reader’s perception =) Thank you for noticing asoulwalker =) Take care, Que

  2. clarabetty says:

    I like it all, very lyrical, but especialy the last line contrasted against earlier, “in the sea of black and grey”

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