thinking too much

there is a rumour
of empty space
its hallow call
fills the breath
of room it
usually occupies

as it tries its
feeble best
to spread its peace

the clusters of chaos
have advancedly arrived
they nudge and jostle
trilling their slogans
each wanting to
trigger

struggling one above the other
to subsume
in desires to consume

“that is the dilemma when you think too much”

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3 thoughts on “thinking too much

  1. asoulwalker says:

    “struggling one above the other
    to subsume
    in desires to consume”

    such a great stanza.

  2. Prashant says:

    there is a rumour
    that one can sense
    a soul in your blog.
    I think the rumours are true !

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