known in the unknown

Everyday it seems a struggle

to find what will be

known in the unknown

what will be accepted

with sighful relief

and what will be

roiling in oily disbelief

what lays hidden away

like a run away but within grasp thief

as your paceful peace

clings perilously begging at his feet.

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6 thoughts on “known in the unknown

  1. zorgor says:

    “roiling in oily disbelief” — very evocative!

  2. Britton says:


    The 1st 3 lines itself convey a whole world of meaning 🙂

  3. Kharma says:

    Yikes. The last line summed the feeling of the poem up. However, my favorite line is ” what will be accepted with sigh full relief, and what will be rolling in oily disbelief”. The word “oily” is so very descriptive!

    • QueridaJ says:

      yes I felt the oily captured just how much uneasy, queasy it is to feel betrayed,in doubt, in denial…thank you for comments Kharma, they are much appreciated =)

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