turn around and see

turn around now

and look at what you see

look at me

and tell me

you don’t like what you see

but don’t say that you can’t bring yourself to see

for all that you see is

whatever you have made of me.

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One thought on “turn around and see

  1. Soul Walker says:

    Having the repeating “ee” ending throughout the poem makes the rhythm and feel of the poem interesting. I like it.

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