a leaden finger presses down

unaligning the unsuspecting spine

aquatic undulations grow quiet

nerves fray and twitch

dull ache pulsates

limbs a-dragging



compressed, congealed

unconfined, uncontained

pressing all its fatted sides against

that chronic dam of

untapped agony:



2 thoughts on “pained

  1. Pawan Hira says:

    …in your world of adjectives, I see you—painting a life, beautifully. 🙂

  2. Rhonda says:

    Wow.. Powerful Que. love it.

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